Saturday, May 14, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday: Not Another Bard's Tale 2

This week we meet Olga, swordswoman extraordinaire and protector of Svetlana, her sister, the chosen one of the Sheep God.

Olga took an offered sword from the crowd and approached Bruce with a gleam in her eye. Her skirts swished with each step forward. She slashed at him with all the force of a hardened swordsman.

He scrambled to block her, his wrist reverberating with the power behind her blow. Realizing she meant business, he tried to stop watching her chest bounce with each thrust, and concentrate more on making himself look less inept. He swore she tugged her blouse a bit lower just to taunt him.

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21 comments:

  1. Ryan SullivanMay 14, 2011 at 10:55 PM

    Haha!

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  2. AllureVanSanzMay 15, 2011 at 1:39 AM

    Cute six! Well done.

    Best,
    Allure

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  3. Pippa JayMay 15, 2011 at 4:05 AM

    I loved that last line! Hey, the mark of a good warrior is to use your strengths to full advantage, lol.

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  4. Patricia PrestonMay 15, 2011 at 9:12 AM

    That girl knows how to use what she's got! Great six!

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  5. Taryn KincaidMay 15, 2011 at 11:48 AM

    Distracted a bit, is he? LOL! Well done.

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  6. Cate MastersMay 15, 2011 at 12:05 PM

    All's fair in love and war! Nice six.

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  7. UnknownMay 15, 2011 at 12:47 PM

    lol, love that she taunted him! Great six.

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  8. Carolyn RosewoodMay 15, 2011 at 12:52 PM

    Great action!!

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  9. Sandra NachlingerMay 15, 2011 at 1:42 PM

    Great scene. Olga knows how to wield all her weapons!

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  10. MegMay 15, 2011 at 3:30 PM

    OOOH! great scene indeed - my daughter loves all that swordplay. Will tell her about this.

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  11. Jayel KayeMay 15, 2011 at 3:38 PM

    work it baby.

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  12. Elisa DaneMay 15, 2011 at 4:50 PM

    Lol! Great scene!

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  13. Susanna FraserMay 15, 2011 at 5:58 PM

    Nice six! I always like a swordswoman.

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  14. J.A. BeardMay 15, 2011 at 8:35 PM

    LOL. That's one way to gain a tactical advantage. :)

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  15. Elizabeth RogueMay 15, 2011 at 9:14 PM

    Now THAT is an excellent distraction ;)

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  16. Liana BrooksMay 15, 2011 at 10:30 PM

    LOL! Hey, any weapon you have is fair game!

    Love this!

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  17. Suzie QuintMay 15, 2011 at 11:29 PM

    I love this kind of hero! I'm guessing he's fairly alpha except when he's around her. Love when guys are written that way. Amazing how just 6 sentences can make me laugh.

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  18. Marion SipeMay 15, 2011 at 11:50 PM

    Ha! I love it! Great six!

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  19. LindsayMay 16, 2011 at 1:16 AM

    You go girl. Kick some ass

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  20. FredMay 16, 2011 at 10:54 AM

    This is the kind of shit you women pull all the time. Wiggle your boobs, then while we're watching that, you plunge the knife in the belly. Oh, yeah, we're onto you now.

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  21. Jean DavisMay 16, 2011 at 11:43 AM

    Oh no! I've let Fred onto our secret!

    Thanks everyone, for stopping by and commenting. :)

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