tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4955548665653773708.post435547754639402899..comments2024-03-16T11:38:39.317-04:00Comments on Author Jean Davis: A to Z: Editing Fiction - VoiceJean Davishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02047709505502621618noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4955548665653773708.post-41505442513238380122017-04-27T02:46:20.128-04:002017-04-27T02:46:20.128-04:00Hi Jean - I've been surprised people have said...Hi Jean - I've been surprised people have said 'I can hear your voice' ... even in Australia ... but I'm not sure I could translate that into a novel - yet the voice is there ... thanks for these great points here - a challenging one to change ... cheers Hilary<br /><br />http://positiveletters.blogspot.co.uk/2017/04/w-is-for-whistlejacket.htmlHilary Melton-Butcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596532480645510678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4955548665653773708.post-35488847213657116542017-04-26T18:28:49.542-04:002017-04-26T18:28:49.542-04:00Voice and consistency, this is a good food-for-tho...Voice and consistency, this is a good food-for-thought post for me because I am preparing to start writing a longer piece then I am use to. This will be important for me.<br /><br />Thanks for visiting my post <a href="https://writingiscommunication.wordpress.com/2017/04/25/a-z-blogging-challenge-raising-boys-the-penis-chronicles-presents-the-letter-v-for-vagina/comment-page-1/#comment-516" rel="nofollow">V for vagina</a> <br />Shari<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4955548665653773708.post-34199447236545987042017-04-26T18:17:11.074-04:002017-04-26T18:17:11.074-04:00It's the hardest thing to define because it...It's the hardest thing to define because it's just kind of there. I think your voice gets refined the more experience you have. Definitely appreciate the tips here.Nick Wilfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841776353790635132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4955548665653773708.post-89686932595180967062017-04-26T12:43:58.679-04:002017-04-26T12:43:58.679-04:00Some good points here. Thanks for sharing. V is fo...Some good points here. Thanks for sharing. <a href="https://shirleycorder.com/virtue-of-value/" rel="nofollow">V is for the Virtue of Value as you Build a Better Blog. </a> #AtoZchallenge.Shirley Corderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04429641202607657089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4955548665653773708.post-47893316283747243142017-04-26T10:23:07.201-04:002017-04-26T10:23:07.201-04:00There are books I'll keep reading in genres I ...There are books I'll keep reading in genres I don't normally read all because the voice is so intoxicating. <br /><br />So I completely agree with you. Voice can make up for a host of downfalls. Thanks for bringing this.<br /><br />https://johndavisfrain.com/2017/04/26/vending-machine/John Davis Frainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18020019400599228492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4955548665653773708.post-71775889738661991682017-04-26T08:58:34.445-04:002017-04-26T08:58:34.445-04:00I have an adverb infestation. *sprays adverbs with...I have an adverb infestation. *sprays adverbs with pesticide*<br /><br /><a href="http://multicoloreddiary.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">The Multicolored Diary: WTF - Weird Things in Folktales</a>A Tarkabarka Hölgyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06719668142192116685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4955548665653773708.post-12819615372637458872017-04-26T08:48:17.840-04:002017-04-26T08:48:17.840-04:00I recently finished drafting my first Middle Grade...I recently finished drafting my first Middle Grade novel and found your Challenge Theme at the perfect time! I plan to re-read all your posts (probably several times) over the next few weeks as I work through the revision process.<br /><br />Journaling was my theme for the challenge<br /><a href="http://mycozybooknook.blogspot.com/2017/04/journaling-v-values-and-beliefs.html" rel="nofollow">Journaling: V is for Values and Beliefs</a>Mollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08414201637917215413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4955548665653773708.post-86853291793902603012017-04-26T08:28:00.977-04:002017-04-26T08:28:00.977-04:00My friends say that I write exactly like I talk. S...My friends say that I write exactly like I talk. So if I decide to delve into non-fiction, it will be a fun adventure to attempt to give others a different voice. I certainly admire those who do it well.<br /><br />Emily | My Life In Ecuador | <a href="https://emilbloo.blogspot.com/2017/04/vegetable-ivory-tagua-atozchallenge.html" rel="nofollow">Vegetable Ivory - Tagua</a>Emily in Ecuadorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06046387339831440902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4955548665653773708.post-86006127029445169472017-04-26T08:24:23.892-04:002017-04-26T08:24:23.892-04:00Depression isn't easy to see from the outside....Depression isn't easy to see from the outside. Perhaps you could show how you appear to others and then also what is going on inside?Jean Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02047709505502621618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4955548665653773708.post-42964027978499467022017-04-26T08:08:01.442-04:002017-04-26T08:08:01.442-04:00I've been trying to get my memoir to sound as ...I've been trying to get my memoir to sound as though I am really depressed, though when looking at me, this would not seem obvious. Jamie Ghionehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06508410672881133235noreply@blogger.com